Altercation Alteration

This whole line of strips was an ill-advised attempt to confront the fact that my main character wasn't very well written. Instead of actually fixing it, I conceived a foil character to point at and say "look how much worse it can be!"

I think a foil character like this can work, but only if the surrounding characters are sufficiently well-developed and/or entertaining enough for their reactions to be worthwhile. We'll see something close to an example of this in the latter half of 2012.

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